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Thursday, February 16, 2012

Hope kiwifruit



When I had my kiwifruit, it felt soft inside but hard outside. We all felt it and we had to make up a sentence and give it to the class room. It felt like a tennis ball.

I thought it was a round flat oval. Some people thought it was a soft ball and other thought it was a potato. It look like a round circle to me. When I look at it I liked the hairy part.

Suddenly we had some time to consume the kiwifruit. When the kiwifruit got into my mouth
I consumed it all. There were these little seeds in my kiwifruit and I thought it was ant’s. The seeds went into my mouth I bit the seed. It was crunchy and sour.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Hope,
    Fantastic story and a great picture too. The story really hoked me in. Thats all I can say.

    From Jouan

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