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Thursday, March 3, 2011

Baseball


When I started to bat I felt nervous. I saw someone bat a powerful hit then I started to do the same. It was so much fun playing baseball,I hope we do it again.
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9 comments:

  1. myaMarch 7, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    WOW hope you blowed my mind out with that AMAZING story!!!

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  2. AsenaMarch 7, 2011 at 10:59 AM

    Hi,Hope

    I really like the way that you used interesting vocabulary. Keep it up girl!!!

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  3. saadiyaMarch 7, 2011 at 2:46 PM

    Hi Hope

    I like the way that you said powerful hit. I really liked your short story.

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  4. HopeMarch 22, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    Thank you Mya
    for your comment I hope you have a lovley day.
    by your best best friend hope

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  5. graceMarch 28, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    Wow girl you baseball story is the BEAST.

    NICE WORK :) <3

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  6. jamesApril 6, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Great piece of writing
    cool work hope
    by james

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  7. AsenaApril 6, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    Hey Hope

    You some really cool writing.

    COOL WORK!
    Love Asena!

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  8. antonioApril 6, 2011 at 9:45 AM

    HI hope great story Ilove it

    by antonio

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  9. JahvanaMay 31, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    Well Done Hope!!!

    Hi My name is Jahvana and I go to Panmure Bridge School.. I thought you did a great blurb but you could of told us how you felt when you took your first hit...

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