She lost her hair band and ask” Sophia to help her look for it. Have you seen my hair band Isabella said” to a stranger sitting down on a big rock? But he” said” he doesn’t know wheres it is.
They looked and looked around and under the sea. It was getting late and we better go home said” Sophia”. We will just wait for a few minute. They took another look down at the beach. I found it I found it. She was very very happy.
So off they went walking happily home. Dancing around and giggling too. Isabella and her sister had a great sunny day.
Hi Hope, I'm Jessica La Force, and I'm a student in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. Let me say first that I love your blog! All of the colors are so fun, and this is a great short story. I thought it was so funny that Isabella lost her hair band, because I do that all the time at the beach. That really brought me into the story. Thank goodness she found it. I hope to read more stories from you in the future.
ReplyDeleteHey Hope, My name is Sam Krhut and I am in EDM310 at the University of South Alabama in Mobile, Alabama. I wanted to compliment you on your outstanding story. I absolutely loved your story about Isabella and her sister at the beach. Here in Alabama, we live on the beaches and I cannot tell you how many times I have helped my little sister look for her hair bands and sunglasses. Also, I love how colorful your blog is. I hope that I can read more of your stories sometime soon. Have a great week at school!
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