Guess what! We had assembly today and it was so funny. We got to watch videos from other teams. My favourite was about Mr Barks screaming, dancing and crying. My next favourite was the museum when the queen of samoa did the dougie dance move.
Mr Jacobson was a big paint brush and paint board. It had different colors like blue, yellow, purple and pink. We had so much fun watching the teachers dancing and performing.
Mr Jacobson was a big paint brush and paint board. It had different colors like blue, yellow, purple and pink. We had so much fun watching the teachers dancing and performing.
Good start to the term Hope. You have done well to include a hook in your writing.
ReplyDeleteI would have liked to see you add more detail to your writing, especially the part about Mr Barks. There was a lot more you could have written about that would have explained why he was crying, dancing and screaming.